I think this poster has the potential to be very strong but that it lacks focus. The two pictures of factories and then the melting earth below, don't seem to flow very well. The additional factory photo was unnecessary because you got your point across with just one. The melting earth was an interesting idea but it was so small and almost seemed like an afterthought instead of being part of the poster. The text choice, although fiery, does not fit with the theme of the poster and takes away from the message. A more versatile text would work better. With some additional attention, this poster is capable of conveying a strong message.
This poster has a good message but it needs works on the images and text. The poster doesn't seem to flow because their are just pictures put in random spots. Also the use of the sun and the font for global warming is a little much. I do like the earth melting on the bottom though. The balance is met, but i think they could have spaced the pictures out and used original pictures. The overall composition needs work on making all the elements come together as well.
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dave this is a good poster i think it gets right to the point and shows that we need to clean up or do something about our pollution.
I think this poster has the potential to be very strong but that it lacks focus. The two pictures of factories and then the melting earth below, don't seem to flow very well. The additional factory photo was unnecessary because you got your point across with just one. The melting earth was an interesting idea but it was so small and almost seemed like an afterthought instead of being part of the poster. The text choice, although fiery, does not fit with the theme of the poster and takes away from the message. A more versatile text would work better. With some additional attention, this poster is capable of conveying a strong message.
This poster has a good message but it needs works on the images and text. The poster doesn't seem to flow because their are just pictures put in random spots. Also the use of the sun and the font for global warming is a little much. I do like the earth melting on the bottom though. The balance is met, but i think they could have spaced the pictures out and used original pictures. The overall composition needs work on making all the elements come together as well.
lauren skonieczny
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