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7 comments:
this poster has a good message, but is unsuccessful in persuading me to do anything. There is a kid pictured but he does not seem affected by drunk driving, so I don't think the artist portrayed there stance very well. The use of text and placement is pretty good, but adding more to it would have given it a more finished look and made it more successsful.
i think this poster has a good message to but i dont really understand the baby because its a little kid he is not going to be driving at that age,also its not really persuading me to do anything. Your ideas are good but maybe a little bit more.
i think that this poster has a overall good message, not to drive and drive. The artist used text well with the two different colors to emphasis the message. The main emphasis in the poster is the little boy and how if you ddrink and drive you are hurting more then your self. I think that the artist could have used a different picture of maybe a child and his family to better help get the message across and persuade the message. The balance in the poster is good, even though there is a lot of white space it seems to work.There is a flow from the words going down the poster. The artist could have done a little more with the picture but i think it was a sucsessful message.
i agree that the poster has a good message but i also agree about the baby. i think that the kid makes the poster seem less serious than it would be if there was an adult or an older person instead. i just didn't feel like the poster was trying to appeal to people that would actually drink and drive. i also think it could use a little more text too. the idea is good overall but there are some mistakes that need to be fixed.
I love the way you used your text it really works, but there isn't really anything else that is read in the picture so something doesn't feel right. I see where you are coming from with the child but if i look at the child and not the message im really no where near the message. So maybe if you showed a kid in a car, or a kid with an injury and a crashed car in the background, it would be easier to understand. But you do have good placements in this poster.
the balance and composition of the text and child are well spaced and emphasized. the proportion of the kid to the text seem like they are overpowering each other. maybe making the child smaller and letting the main message be the vocal point. as a persuasive poster, this to me did not persuade or influence my way of thinking and it probably would not persaude anyone else that wants to drink and drive. the ideas are really excellent, but maybe having a more relative picture would make it more effective and attention grabbing.
amanda cockrell
This one of the weak poster. The baby dose not deal with drunk driving. I get the main emphasis on the baby. The balance is good but he over all them dose not go. It needs more work and more thought.
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