Wednesday, May 13, 2009

Smoking affects others

3 comments:

NickArmold said...

I think this poster is affective in getting its message across. I think the dominance in this photo, is the text which is good because that is your message. I think your poster is a little heavy on the left, because of the smoke and the text both on the left. I also think the next is a little hard to read, but it doesn't really take away from the overall design. I also like how the smoke kind of leads you up to the message. I think the text, as in the message could be more clear. Because, are you relating it to second-hand smoke? Overall, I really like this poster and the message it brings across. I especially like the smoke over the text. Good Job

MJulian said...

This poster is a little hard to read i think you went a little heavy on the smoke on the picture cause its sort of difficult to read the font thats on the back round maybe if you put the font on top of the smoke effect it would of came out better. The font you did use could be more eye catching its just sorta plain. You wanna catch someones eye and pull them in and it didnt work to well. Alll i could see was the smoke i didnt have any idea on what it said.

Unknown said...

I think this poster sends a strong message and gets the point across. But I do think that you could make a little easier to read by either not using as much smoke or changing the opacity on it so it is lighter and you can see the words better. But I think the smoke does go with the picture and works as a nice lead in into the picture and it brings the picture together. Overall I thought you did a nice job on your poster and used a lot of creativity in it and I really liked what you did with it.