Wednesday, May 13, 2009

Trust in God

7 comments:

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Unknown said...

Overall, i think the poster has a quiet feel throughout the image. I like how the light fading from the bottom to the top really illustrates a calm and gloomy feeling. The rhythm overall is very clean and flows very well. The dominance of the two people kneeling by the items on the floor is very strong and draws you to the people's position. The balance is even, although the cross seems to be hiding in the background. I think making the cross more brighter would of conveyed the poster more. The proportion of the words and the people seem like they are competing for attention. Maybe making the people a little brighter would balance the words and people together. The proportion is also realistic and very dramatic. The spatial organization is well planned and makes it easy to follow and understand. The composition is very persuasive and makes you think of god's care for you and your actions. Overall, nice poster and commitment to the project.

amanda cockrell

Unknown said...

All i can say is wow... I now trust in god. This poster has proven to me that god is always there. I love the many examples of drugs and guns. It really tells me that when people are in trouble.. God will pick you up. I also love the "quiet" theme. the poster is very suddle with the soft blue colors and the low opacity. It makes you have to get closer and study more.. the poster then captures your heart. great job!

Unknown said...

well, the first thing i do when i look at this poster is squint because it is kind of hard to distinguish what the image in the poster is exactly saying. i like the idea you were shooting for i just would maybe make it a bit more clear as to what exactly the image is displaying it has a lot of potential with a few touch ups it can be really good.

Jonathan Vojtush said...

**The colors aren't how they are supposed to be which is unfortunate, its allot easier to see, but oh well. Thanks for the comments!

Paul said...

this poster has a really good idea and it is well presented. i think the picture really helped the idea alot. one thing i think would make this poster better is if you colored or made the cross at the top a little darker to get people from a glance to know what this poster is about. another thing you could to do make it better is increase the font size of the last sentence. other than that i think it has a fitting font choice and is a very good poster overall.

Unknown said...

i really like this one with the fade that it has. it is a really great effect and i feel with the contrast and texture of the picture and the colors is makes this a great poster really great job!