Wednesday, May 13, 2009

technology does more harm

2 comments:

JM said...

This poster's design is very well done. The opacity of the images creates a nice balance between the two and makes them seem like they belonged together. This may have been helped by the similar colors. The text benefits from nice spatial organization, in that it looks like it is coming out at the viewer, and it appears to be closer than the images. I think the text was also well done, with the red really emphasizing the important points. However, when i actually read the message, it doesn't make a lot of sense to me, and I think removing some of the unnecessary text would help this poster be more successful.

patricklowden said...

I like this poster a lot. I like the dominance shown by the explosion and I really like how you blend both images together. I do like the asymmetrical balance and the text placement. The only problem is that I don't see what message you are trying to get across, other than that I like the flow and the balance.