this poster is really really interesting. i like how it looks as if the person is actually speaking censored words. the spacing of the poster is good. nothing is bunched up and there isn't too much white space. it also flows pretty nicely. i like how in the texts it goes from black to red. it shows force. my eyes follow this poster so wonderfully. one intense experience. since the flow is so good i believe the balance goes along with that. once thing i think that could have been done better was make it more interesting. there should be more showing censorship. not just a word cloud with some $$#% in it. maybe put some more pictures or text in it to fill up the white.
This persuasive poster is very simple and gets to the point which is a good thing because you know right away what it is trying to get you to do. I dont think it is all that appealing though because there is nothing that really draws your attention toward it. Some of the colors are slightly dull and don't catch the viewer's eye. I might have made the words STOP CENSORSHIP bigger and stand out more because that is the main idea.
This poster needs some work... i think it looks way too 2 dimensional. If you could have put a photo that really shows someone talking dirty it would help. You cant see facial expressions so you dont get the feeling that that person is, and should be alowed, to talk with bad language. The message is weak also. I dont know how many people are gonna support vulgar language on t.v. Not many parents like there children hearing bad talk.
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this poster is really really interesting. i like how it looks as if the person is actually speaking censored words. the spacing of the poster is good. nothing is bunched up and there isn't too much white space. it also flows pretty nicely. i like how in the texts it goes from black to red. it shows force. my eyes follow this poster so wonderfully. one intense experience. since the flow is so good i believe the balance goes along with that. once thing i think that could have been done better was make it more interesting. there should be more showing censorship. not just a word cloud with some $$#% in it. maybe put some more pictures or text in it to fill up the white.
This persuasive poster is very simple and gets to the point which is a good thing because you know right away what it is trying to get you to do. I dont think it is all that appealing though because there is nothing that really draws your attention toward it. Some of the colors are slightly dull and don't catch the viewer's eye. I might have made the words STOP CENSORSHIP bigger and stand out more because that is the main idea.
This poster needs some work... i think it looks way too 2 dimensional. If you could have put a photo that really shows someone talking dirty it would help. You cant see facial expressions so you dont get the feeling that that person is, and should be alowed, to talk with bad language. The message is weak also. I dont know how many people are gonna support vulgar language on t.v. Not many parents like there children hearing bad talk.
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