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10 comments:
I really like the image you used and the effect that you added to it. One thing that i think could be improved is the spacing. One of the text is all the way at the top and the other is all the way at the bottom. I think that there is a lot of open space and it could have been utilized better. Also the wording isn't as persuasive as it could have been because nothing is really happening in the photo except a car that is blurry.
I think the poster is displayed well and interesting to look at, but the point that their trying to make is unclear. Nothing happened to the car so i don't know if it's supposed to be crashing or just driving fine. Also the use of text could be improved. It doesn't show the consequences of drunk driving.
I think that this is one of the weakest posters. It had a good design to it and i like the message but i don't know what the message is. The car effect was cool but didn't reflect the message at all. The use of text but alright but needs to be reworked so it reflects what you are trying to say. A very simple design but not the best design. A lot of work still needs to be done.
I think this poster is interesting to look at. It shows how one sees when under the influence and it gives the poster a bigger meaning. It draws attention to the car and how they made it look blurry and fuzzy. After looking for more detail you notice the one way sign and it makes the picture even more interesting. I am also a very strong believer in dont drink and drive so i was glad to see such a powerful poster. The way the poster just comes to life is amazing to me.
i really like the image of the car and the skid marks on the road. it looks proportioned to the car and overall poster. however, rhythm isn't very clear and the text at the very top and very bottom does not stand out and persuade me to not drink and drive. balance is not excellent so i think if you made the text a little bigger and had more emphases on the car, it would look less empty. the space organization is not well put together. everything seems to be too high or too low. the composition is very low. the car's perfect condition does not look like it has anything to do with the message the artist is trying to portray. maybe having little dents and a drunken driver on the road hurt would persuade it more effectively.
amanda cockrell
I like this poster allot, the picture really grabbed my attention and the words at the bottom seem to smoothly flow in the picture. Things seem to just seem like they work together. The only criticism i can find is that your message at the top isn't really telling what is happening the picture because there is noting wrong in the picture. Yo say "this may happen to you" but theres no accident or anything, you see what i mean.
I really agree with the idea that this poster is portraying, but it needs work. I really think that the artist should of put more emphisis on the multiple images, to show people the better effects of alcohol.
i think that this is a very interesting idea. i really liked the effect you added to the car to make the illusion of motion. i think you could have done a better job with the proportions because the car is small and this creates a lot of negative space that doesnt work well. also, but it has good composition for the most part, and it was a strong idea.
When i looked at your poster I knew what it was talking about it was pretty striaght forward. The effects ou use were pretty good it made you picture how a drunk driver is. and how you would see it threw there eyes. I think you could of used more of a flashy font with the words though that would of been cool. but over all your poster is good.
I really like this one. I like how the car looks like it's in motion and I feel that the text balances nicely with the photo. I really like the dominance and the distortion of the photo. I do notice that the one way sign could have been blended in better with the photo. I also would like it if the "Drink" was more dominant. Other than that I really like how it catches the eye.
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