It was strong compostion but you still could have improved on it a little more. The large picture in the backround and the small picture do not balance out evenly or with eachother or the negative space. I think you could have chose a stronger font to really get the message through to the readers. Whiting out the "innocent" makes it a little hard to read. overall i like the message i just think it could have been stronger.
I feel that this piece was very strong and was very good. Their were a couple of things that could be better in my opinion but overall i thought you did and excellent job. Deffinatly the dominant part of this piece was the baby picture and the portrayal of a good moment in a childs life. This really makes you feel negutivly about abortion. The rythem of the poster was good just I fell that the flow from the backround to the main picture didn't flow. The poster was balanced very well with the use of different sizes of texts and placement of the various parts of the poster. The proportion was also well done with the only problem still being the contrast of the two pictures. The composition was very strong and i thing you did an awesome job of expressing how youf feel.
I think that this is A very elaborate work of art Matt, because you used alot of greate visuals in your work, like the baby in the backround becase it goes along with what you are trying to say nicley. What also got me interested is the fact that you put an example at the bottom in image form realy got my attention. I also think the art is balanced well and show alot of character, just tweak the imagery and contrast and you'll have one fine work of art. -Isaac Ruiz-
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It was strong compostion but you still could have improved on it a little more. The large picture in the backround and the small picture do not balance out evenly or with eachother or the negative space. I think you could have chose a stronger font to really get the message through to the readers. Whiting out the "innocent" makes it a little hard to read. overall i like the message i just think it could have been stronger.
I feel that this piece was very strong and was very good. Their were a couple of things that could be better in my opinion but overall i thought you did and excellent job. Deffinatly the dominant part of this piece was the baby picture and the portrayal of a good moment in a childs life. This really makes you feel negutivly about abortion. The rythem of the poster was good just I fell that the flow from the backround to the main picture didn't flow. The poster was balanced very well with the use of different sizes of texts and placement of the various parts of the poster. The proportion was also well done with the only problem still being the contrast of the two pictures. The composition was very strong and i thing you did an awesome job of expressing how youf feel.
I think that this is A very elaborate work of art Matt, because you used alot of greate visuals in
your work, like the baby in the backround becase it goes along with what you are trying to say nicley. What also got me interested is the fact that you put an example at the bottom in image form realy got my attention. I also think the art is balanced well and show alot of character, just tweak the imagery and contrast and you'll have one fine work of art. -Isaac
Ruiz-
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