nice txt. i like the flow of the saying. it earth is a bit choppy and that really makes it looked really photo fixed.i also like the green text but it dosn't work for the earth color. if it was left alone it would work and be more friendly to the human eye.
I see the general Message behind your poster but i do not think that u got the message across of keeping us Green. The way u set your poster up with the green kinda made a double negative type of deal. "Dont be mean keep us green" That text was in green and so was the earth. Secondly, your poster doesnt really show anything bad about greenhouse gases or pollution. Also there is nothng that stands out from the rest that catches my eye. Overall it is a decent poster but i feel that you could of done a better job of getting the message across.
This poster somewhat confuses me. There is nothing there to truly portray why we should be green, or what that even means. The Earth looks like it was cut and pasted from some other source- a better placing and blending job most certainly could have been done. Also, the text being the same color as the Earth does not help, due to the lack of contrast throughout. On a more positive note, the message is a very good one, and with a few minor modifications, this could be a much more effective and interesting poster.
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nice txt. i like the flow of the saying. it earth is a bit choppy and that really makes it looked really photo fixed.i also like the green text but it dosn't work for the earth color. if it was left alone it would work and be more friendly to the human eye.
I see the general Message behind your poster but i do not think that u got the message across of keeping us Green. The way u set your poster up with the green kinda made a double negative type of deal. "Dont be mean keep us green" That text was in green and so was the earth. Secondly, your poster doesnt really show anything bad about greenhouse gases or pollution. Also there is nothng that stands out from the rest that catches my eye. Overall it is a decent poster but i feel that you could of done a better job of getting the message across.
This poster somewhat confuses me. There is nothing there to truly portray why we should be green, or what that even means. The Earth looks like it was cut and pasted from some other source- a better placing and blending job most certainly could have been done. Also, the text being the same color as the Earth does not help, due to the lack of contrast throughout. On a more positive note, the message is a very good one, and with a few minor modifications, this could be a much more effective and interesting poster.
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