Monday, December 15, 2008

Save the snow

9 comments:

k.gable said...

I don't understand what the point of this is, it doesn't snow everywhere! There is no flow to the poster, and dominant element is hard to see and understand. There is also no balance.

Unknown said...

I feel that this poster needs a lot of work. I don't understand what this poster is trying to persuade. The text is hard to read as the background has a lot going on. But I do like the picture, it's kind of catches the eye. This pieve would be well balanced if the text balanced out with the background. I do like the porportions and sixe between the shoe and the tiny snowman. Overall, I think it needs some work, but it has potential.

cameronlada said...

snow man FTW!

Josh Hays said...

The picture is good and the foot is good but isn't a persuasive poster suppose to not look doctored? It's too cartoony and shows really no ability to doctor a photo. Youy took the photo of the snowman but the face on it doesn't look real. There is really n o focul point besides the giant shoe and the snowman. It has the ability to be good without the false coloring but with it, it really can't. It needs to be worked on especially the shadowing because everything is off. Where is the sun point?!?!? There needs to be a main sun point or else everything is out of wack. Good idea but the shadow makes it look like a cartoon which won't be taken seriously.

-Josh Hays-

jordan stawicki said...

When i first looked at this persuasive poster, I was not completley aware of the point. I think the idea is a nice beginning, however it is not effective to everyone, considering that it does not snow everywhere. The poster has a nice dominant image of the snowman and the foot, and the rhythm of the poster flows. However, I feel that the text does not flow with the rest of the image. Although the image is balanced and proportioned well, the effect that the viwer recieves does not really complete the goal. Over all, the poster is has a good composition and is spatially organized, the creator could have spent a little more time to produce a better persuasive topic.

Unknown said...

This is a very interesting looking poster. The cartoon effect helps with the message to help kids. But I don't understand what issue is: the only thing i can think of would be to prevent global warming and "save the snow"??? If that is the direction you were trying to go you should have included "stop global warming" somewhere on the poster.

peter doyle said...

Overall i dont not understand this poster at all. It doesnt make any sense because you cannot control the environment and i dont think this is a persuasive poster. The dominance in this picture is the snow man. This could have been a stronger design if you would have spent more time in designing this. The poster flows well its just i dont understand the point of this poster.

Unknown said...

This poster is not effective and does not have a good message. The dominant image is fuzzy and unsatisfying to the eyes. It is not balanced with no white space and the image seems cluttered. The text does not flow at all with this poster. It has an okay composition but needs to be more organized and clear to get the point across. Overall this is my east favorite image.

Unknown said...

I do not hink that this poster is very strong. I am still not sure at what the poster is trying to say. I think that a persuasive poster should really get it's point acrross, which this poster failed to do. Also, blue letering is hard to see when it touches the black backround, and the lettering is covering too much of the picture. I think that although the foot is a good lead in, the rest of the picture has no flow and the elements don't fit well with each other. Tghe lettering's shadow adds good depth, but other than that i do not like this poster at all.