Monday, December 15, 2008

Stop Smokng

4 comments:

kdmiscool3882 said...

I actually really like this poster. I think the message used makes a lot of sence and is actually kind of catchy. it would make a lot more sence to a younger generation which is good sence most of the younger generation smokes. i also like the large leg and i think it was placed well in the poster and really made it stick out as one of the better designs. Your use of space was managed very well and the negative space makes the poster work really well too. Good job, 8/10

Unknown said...

Overall, I like this poster. It is simple, bold and gets the point across. The picture of the foot stomping on the cigarettes is the dominating element and having it lead onto the paper works well with the composition. The colors and font also work well together and draw the viewer into the poster. Also, the picture and words do not make the poster too crowded and the negative space is properly displayed. This poster does look like it’s finished and you did a good job.

Anonymous said...

I really like this persuasive poster. Your opinion on the topic of not smoking is obvious. I also really like your catchy slogan. MY favorite is the dominant, piece of the high-heel shoe. I think it may have been better if you used a shoe that maybe was not so glamourous because it may apppear to some audiences that smoking is a good thing.But i do like how you photoshopped the leg so that it lead into the poster, causing the eye to by led in aswell. In my opinion you suceeded with negative space. Also the text, pictures, and colors all work together to create a great poster! Good job.

Rachid Lamouri said...

This poster was decent but needs a lot of adjustments. First of all I like how the leg leads you into the poster and the "hang tough don't puff" is kind of catchy. But the rest is either irrelevent or doesn't make sense. The "stop smoking" is unecessary and it just takes up space making the poster a little crowded. The shoe over the cigarettes does not really make sense. It should be stomping out the cigarette which might be what the author was originally going for. Last of all, the poster seems targeted towards women because of the leg. This could have been done on purpose but the author should keeps her audience in mind and use the appropriate picture.