Monday, December 15, 2008

Stop racism

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3 comments:

Unknown said...

Overall, this persuasive poster was okay. I was simple and read-able but it could have taken a step further. The font should have been bolder so it could stand out more. It would have been more interesting if the words were bigger and kind of leading the viewer into the poster. The composition wasn’t too bad but when I looking for it on the page it was hard to find. If I wasn’t looking for it then it wouldn’t have been one that would stand out to me. On the more positive side, I like the picture and the saying “friendship has no color”. The spatial organization well good because it wasn’t too crammed and there was enough negative space. Overall, the idea was good; it just needed to be taken a step further.

December 17, 2008 at 5:06 AM
Unknown said...

Danny, i think this is a good persausive poster. I like the quote used and i also like the placement of the text along with the picture. I like the font used for and "STOP" really stands out. You could have maybe made it a little bigger. I like the idea of the two hands holding each other with different race, but i think a little more could have been done on the picture. I believe that it could have been done more clear and finished. I think you have good spatial organization and good balance. Overall I would say this is a pretty good piece of work

December 17, 2008 at 5:07 AM
cameronlada said...

it human nature to think you are supirior so i dont realy think your poster has much effect

December 17, 2008 at 6:26 AM

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