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5 comments:
I feel that this is a very interesting poster but the font is very hard to read and the words are to close together and i'm not sure the font works for the poster. Also it's hard to tell what the pictures is of. Maybe if i understood better what the poster was persuading i would get what the picture is. on the other hand the balancing and proportion of pictures and fonts on the poster work pretty well.
this poaster sucks
wrong things
text
photo
and the whole thing is just very hard to understand and hard to read
it is a very gray picture and no contrast of colors. i would restart this project and turn in a nother one.
i am confused about what you are trying to say. and i don't really understand your poster.
i think you could go further with this poster, and make it more readable, intersesting, and more understandable.
i cant really read the text, its hard one the eyes, and how it's pushed all together. i think you could just make some of the words bold and use a different font, and spread the words out more. maybe put some going down the side of the poster or not use as many words.
the picture in the center, i don't understand it. is it supposed to represent broken clocks?
and the picture in the back. i think it's too much.
you can go a lot further with this project, and i feel that you didn't. you could have changed the colors and make it look not so spookyish.
i don't like this poster, but it was a good try. (5)
This poster keeps me looking and thinking, which is a good and bad thing. I can't figure out what the pictures are supposed to be. Also, i dont think your font choice was good on a dark background. This font comes off as more like a halloween/spooky one. The phrase at the top is hard to read, i think if you used this font, you should have tweaked with it a little, maybe try to space it out. The phrase also is confusing to me. I dont really inderstand it. However, the time pieces part goes well with the center picture, but i dont know what its supposed to mean. And when i looked closer at the center picture i noticed that there are clocks, so that also helps me understand what your trying to persue, but just needs to be a little clearer. The composition of the poster is very good. I like the centered picture and the picture in the background goes well with each other, but again, it's very hard to read and even know what the pictures are, so overall i think you could have spent more time tweaking with the fonts, and used different pictures. I also think it should be much brighter than it is now. (6/10)
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