The most dominant piece i see are the words human rights, and the two men holding hands above it. Which is a very good thing since that is the message of the poster. The words human rights are supposed to be big and the creator did that perfectly! The leading of the hands from the top of page make you see the words more clearly, and allow the reader to fully grasp the concept of the poster. The flow of the poster, or the rhythm, is good too. I like how you changed the color of the word happened since that word is the main part of the question: "What happened to human rights" but since it is a question is does need a question mark =) but still , even without it, people get the main idea. The way the wording is allows the reader to see the whole poster, and it out focus on the picture in the middle, which is good! Good poster, but maybe the word human should be a different color? maybe?, but everything looks good... it really catches the eye!
I like your layout design, the use of color was a good.The message is clear and cause the readers attention when going through the layouts so good work keep it up.
I would have to say this is my favorite piece. The only thing i could say negative is that i think the left hand needs a little more touch up. Otherwise it is a very strong poster and isnt to cluttered but also not to plain. The flow of it is very strong and i wouldnt change anything about the text or anything contrast was good to. This is a poster that i think could capture anyones attention.
Strong design. I like the large letters, the two male signs. I think a little bit more could have been done to the photo, it just seems there. if that makes any sense. And by human rights i assume you mean, life, liberty, and pursuit of happiness. but i disagree that marriage is a "human" right. It is a religious right, and if that religion they adhere to says its wrong, its wrong. I completly disagree with homosexual marriage, but i think you did a nice job on the poster
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The most dominant piece i see are the words human rights, and the two men holding hands above it. Which is a very good thing since that is the message of the poster. The words human rights are supposed to be big and the creator did that perfectly! The leading of the hands from the top of page make you see the words more clearly, and allow the reader to fully grasp the concept of the poster. The flow of the poster, or the rhythm, is good too. I like how you changed the color of the word happened since that word is the main part of the question: "What happened to human rights" but since it is a question is does need a question mark =) but still , even without it, people get the main idea. The way the wording is allows the reader to see the whole poster, and it out focus on the picture in the middle, which is good! Good poster, but maybe the word human should be a different color? maybe?, but everything looks good... it really catches the eye!
I like your layout design, the use of color was a good.The message is clear and cause the readers attention when going through the layouts so good work keep it up.
I would have to say this is my favorite piece. The only thing i could say negative is that i think the left hand needs a little more touch up. Otherwise it is a very strong poster and isnt to cluttered but also not to plain. The flow of it is very strong and i wouldnt change anything about the text or anything contrast was good to. This is a poster that i think could capture anyones attention.
Strong design. I like the large letters, the two male signs. I think a little bit more could have been done to the photo, it just seems there. if that makes any sense. And by human rights i assume you mean, life, liberty, and pursuit of happiness. but i disagree that marriage is a "human" right. It is a religious right, and if that religion they adhere to says its wrong, its wrong. I completly disagree with homosexual marriage, but i think you did a nice job on the poster
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