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2 comments:
I think that for the topic your on the design could be more dramatic, however I like how you used text to get your message across. The design is very good at moving the "onlookers" eye around, starting with dominance in the middle right of the poster and moving from there, following the images and words around. As for balance, what you have works, but I would find a way to use the white space more to capture and emphasize rather than to fill the background, but thats a more of personal preference thing. Proportionally the design does well, and I like how you used a bold line towards the bottom to bring attention to "the law", the layout works for what you decided to do. Over all not a bad design, maybe a little adjusting but it has potential.
Your persuasive poster inspires people to want to get involved. Your hard edged texts gives the feeling that this is a very serious issue and should not be taken lightly. Your use of negative space in this piece takes away from the pictures and focuses more on the text, and flows nicely. I feel that the pictures are disproportionate to each other. For example the little kitten should be bigger or maybe take one of the dog pictures out and replace it with a cat. I also feel that the spacing and overlapping of pictures wasn't necessary. But overall nice poster.
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