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5 comments:
The poster is good for the color and arrangement but there are some spelling mistakes which to a higher power would think "Maybe this kid doesn't know how to spell so we're going to not pay attention to it". It doesn't appeal to most people because when looking at the picture it just looks like a matinee sleeping and doesn't show damage to it which the light is covering. Tone down the light because you can't see half of the picture. The words are too spaced out. Not like the spacing but the amount of space between the lines. "Stop the Boats" is too far up and is not the first thing you see or he second thing. You want to make it appeal to everyone and the font size isn't big enough to really notice at a first glance.
Sorry. That first comment was josh. Finalpart2 is josh Hays. Sorry.
Your poster doesn't display a clear message its a out there problem not a world problem. I will say the use of color wasn't great for this situation it kind of hind the message just a little tone adjustments its very simple, there are spelling errors i recommend to do a spell check in the future. Over all work a little harder, spell check, ask for help if needed.
this poster could be effective...but it is hard to read and you cant really see the picture. To make this poster more effective it would help to have the words be more dominant by making them a different color that would stand out from the background color and making them bigger. the placement of the words could also use a little adjusting becasue the first line is too far up so it is not the first thing people look at the picture it. and for the picture, it is hard to see what it is so the message does not come across as easily. it doesnt necessarily show that the manitee is hurt is just look likes its swimming away. Having the no boat symbol is effective and easy to read quickly so readers will understand what the poster is talking about. The background gives the poster depth and texture but sometimes white helps to balance out pictues and words.With just a little more work this poster could be so much stronger.
~elissa c
I don't really understand what you're trying to say. the background is too busy and the picture doesn't fit, i can't really tell what you're trying to get me to do. a better picture and a less busy background would make this poster a lot better and a lot more successful.
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