Ok mark i like the way you set in the pictures. They dont look like they are just thrown in there they are placed correctly. your backround fits the picture with the colors that you use. i understand the topic right away from looking at your poster and i dont have to take time and guess whta it is about. for the most part i like the placement of the words but i dont like the small words to big words but i do like the use of the different text. you did a great job of spacial organization as well. everything looks well spaced and nothing is bunched in there. there is balance to it by everything setting themselves off of each other. overall good poster
This is a strong persuasive poster in my opinion for many reasons. i like the way the artist used a picture that showed emotion toward the topic choosen. By using a sad picture, the topic of "adopting a child" becomes stronger maybe making the reader think twice when reading the poster. Spacial organization is portrayed very well creating the eye to move smoothly throughout the work. I feel that this poster is also well balanced. One side is not overpowering than the other. Although i think this is a good poster, I feel the background is kind of distracting to the poster. The striped seem to hard on the eye causing the reader to mostly focus on the background rather than the more important elements.
I think this poster is really persuasive and effective. The point gets across really quickly and the poster is well finsihed and balenced. The pictures are well balenced and proportional to the words being said. When you say in the poster "then who will?", it really makes you think about it and its really true. I think this poster can persuade just about anyone. The dominant parts of the poster, which are the pictures, also appeal to the emotions and persude you further more. The background makes the poster more interesting, and lets there be less open space. Overall i think this poster is really well done and finsihed!
The message that you have choosen to confront is great and many people are affected by it in many ways. I feel that if the word "you" in the first line had more emphasis, if it was bold or a different color, to stand out more it would have been more sucessful. the emphasis on you would give every reader the feeling that the creater was talking directly to them. I also disagree with your picture on the right. i dont think it shows how adopting a child can make a differnece. it gives me more of a feeling of happiness and bonding. it has some great potential i just think you have to dig deeper next time and use more emotions.
overall this is a strong persuasive poster. The poster has good balance to it. The point gets across quickly and thats good. I like the slogan. I like the "Who Will" it really makes you think about adopting a child. I like the background it really fits well with the color of the pictures. I like the placement of the pictures to, and i like the negative space that you used. overall i think its a strong poster.
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Ok mark i like the way you set in the pictures. They dont look like they are just thrown in there they are placed correctly. your backround fits the picture with the colors that you use. i understand the topic right away from looking at your poster and i dont have to take time and guess whta it is about. for the most part i like the placement of the words but i dont like the small words to big words but i do like the use of the different text. you did a great job of spacial organization as well. everything looks well spaced and nothing is bunched in there. there is balance to it by everything setting themselves off of each other. overall good poster
This is a strong persuasive poster in my opinion for many reasons. i like the way the artist used a picture that showed emotion toward the topic choosen. By using a sad picture, the topic of "adopting a child" becomes stronger maybe making the reader think twice when reading the poster. Spacial organization is portrayed very well creating the eye to move smoothly throughout the work. I feel that this poster is also well balanced. One side is not overpowering than the other. Although i think this is a good poster, I feel the background is kind of distracting to the poster. The striped seem to hard on the eye causing the reader to mostly focus on the background rather than the more important elements.
I think this poster is really persuasive and effective. The point gets across really quickly and the poster is well finsihed and balenced. The pictures are well balenced and proportional to the words being said. When you say in the poster "then who will?", it really makes you think about it and its really true. I think this poster can persuade just about anyone. The dominant parts of the poster, which are the pictures, also appeal to the emotions and persude you further more. The background makes the poster more interesting, and lets there be less open space. Overall i think this poster is really well done and finsihed!
The message that you have choosen to confront is great and many people are affected by it in many ways. I feel that if the word "you" in the first line had more emphasis, if it was bold or a different color, to stand out more it would have been more sucessful. the emphasis on you would give every reader the feeling that the creater was talking directly to them. I also disagree with your picture on the right. i dont think it shows how adopting a child can make a differnece. it gives me more of a feeling of happiness and bonding. it has some great potential i just think you have to dig deeper next time and use more emotions.
overall this is a strong persuasive poster. The poster has good balance to it. The point gets across quickly and thats good. I like the slogan. I like the "Who Will" it really makes you think about adopting a child. I like the background it really fits well with the color of the pictures. I like the placement of the pictures to, and i like the negative space that you used. overall i think its a strong poster.
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