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ClusterMap
8 comments:
The images you have on here aren't blended well into the background picture , especially the tank. it makes it look like you just plopped down pictures relating to the Iraq war. The font was a good choice, and you got the point across, but images throws it off. also the images seem a bit dark, and it would have been better using less blur.
I understand you are trying to tell people to end the war.
I think this has potential but you would need to work on it more.
The qaulity of the images aren't that good, and the cut outs of the people are a bit choppy.
The tank doesn't blend well either.
Compositionally I think it is a bit plain, and there is some dead space.
The text doesn't really fit, it doens't give off an emotional feeling.
So try to work on those next time
well i understand the message very well but its real boring. not very good edits to make the picture and there is a lot of just negative space. all the black space is just too boring. the text is ok i think it could be better somehow. the pictures just really dont send the same message as the text.
I'm not a fan of this one. The images aren't cohesive and don't really blend well. I get the overall idea of the poster, but it could've been carried out in a much stronger fashion.
I like the circular shape used between the picture and the background, I think it gives a unique style to the picture as a whole.
This picture is a definant winner in my loser book, the quality of the tank is tremendously grainy. you had a good topic but u didnt portray it in this picture
You had a sound idea, and the layout itself was pretty good. The problem is in poor image quality and I didn't much like the droughted ground you used, a sandier background would have been better. Image quality could have been better too.
I can see the point that your trying to get across from your text, but not your pictures. I think you could have done a better job with the images to pursuade people to think the same thing. The images also arent clear and don't really blend with the rest of the poster.
You obviously have a very solid idea of what you're trying to portray in this poster which is a good thing. But unfortunately, the images that you chose don't exactly work with the design. The text also seems a bit immature and under developed. I think you could probably choose a better font and manipulate it to be more effective in what you are trying to say. Also, you used the wrong form of 'to.' It should read, "before it is TOO late," and that's not that major, but it's also not just a minor spelling error. It definately takes away a lot of your credibility. This isn't a lost cause though, you could fix it and make the poster very effective.
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