Thursday, April 17, 2008

Kyle W- Divorce hurts

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

The message of the poster works well with the issue. But the only problem with this is the font. I don't think the font works well with the message. The issue is a serious issue, so I think a more formal font would have worked well. The font seems childish, yeah the poster's sole idea is children, but about children being hurt by divorce... So having such a childish font doesn't work well with the message being portrayed.
Overall, the poster is well done. The message is clearly portrayed and the composition works very well.

Anonymous said...

this is pretty good i like how the color change is the background is broken up and not in a straight line. i think where it says divorce hurts should be bolder and im not sure if that is the best placement for it either. the girl in the corner was a good choice it makes it simple and not cluttered and gets the point across.

Anonymous said...

This is a great poster. I think you used negative space effectively and it's not boring to me at all. The broken edges in the background give it a cool effect and your slogan is really original. The 'Divorce Hurts' was just thrown in there and doesn't really work well with it's placement. But overall I think that it is a good design and gets the point across clearly.