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Thursday, April 17, 2008
Justin C- Equal rights
4 comments:
Anonymous
said...
I understand what you are trying to portray with this, and I think it gets the message across well. The thing I don't think fits is the font. I like the doves and the effect it gives with MLK like he is letting them free, how African Americans want to be free! GOOD JOB JUSTIN
i really like what you were trying to portray through "the dream is not yet reached" and how you stuck to black and white throughout your composition, but some of the images i've noticed have sharp pointed edges - if you tidied it up a bit im sure it would look a lot better. i also think in your text you can put more empasis in some of the words to catch the readers attention like "not". other than that i really liked where you were going with this.
good poster, Your composition is pretty interesting and I like how MLK is letting the doves free. the black and white effect was a brillaint idea. The text could use some work but the placement and size works good. Your idea was very bold and out going . NicE !!!!!!!!!!!
I feel that this is one of the strongest out of the bunch. I like how the font is bold and easily readable. I also like the collage of people at the bottom and how the whole disign is put together and flows well. The only thing i think coould have been better was the point trying to be put acroos. By looking at it i wasnt able to tell what the topic was and what you were trying to persuade me to do.
4 comments:
I understand what you are trying to portray with this, and I think it gets the message across well.
The thing I don't think fits is the font.
I like the doves and the effect it gives with MLK like he is letting them free, how African Americans want to be free!
GOOD JOB JUSTIN
i really like what you were trying to portray through "the dream is not yet reached" and how you stuck to black and white throughout your composition, but some of the images i've noticed have sharp pointed edges - if you tidied it up a bit im sure it would look a lot better. i also think in your text you can put more empasis in some of the words to catch the readers attention like "not". other than that i really liked where you were going with this.
good poster,
Your composition is pretty interesting and I like how MLK is letting the doves free. the black and white effect was a brillaint idea. The text could use some work but the placement and size works good. Your idea was very bold and out going . NicE !!!!!!!!!!!
I feel that this is one of the strongest out of the bunch. I like how the font is bold and easily readable. I also like the collage of people at the bottom and how the whole disign is put together and flows well. The only thing i think coould have been better was the point trying to be put acroos. By looking at it i wasnt able to tell what the topic was and what you were trying to persuade me to do.
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