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- Alex T- Feed the hungry
- Chelsea R- For abortion
- Kristen T- Against smoking
- Justin C- Equal rights
- Tim G- Stop steroid use
- Sam H- End racism
- Mitch K- Stop deforestation
- Kyle W- Divorce hurts
- Kelly S- Don't drink and drive
- Jessica A- Fight American poverty
- Emily f- Support gay marriage
- Danielle H- Stop the Darfur Genocide
- Colleen Y- Prolife saves lives
- Christina P- Don't drink and drive
- Cheslea B- Support gay marriage
- Ben C- Evolution is true
- Alaina H- Greenovate
- Aaron J- Smoking affects us all
- Victor C- End the Iraq war
- Steve G- We can stop pollution
- Kaitlin K- Invisible soldier
- Shelby M- Drinking abuse
- Alex M- World hunger
- Roshni K- Stop animal cruelty
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i like the word choice you used at the bottom, it shows your perspective on the issue. But the setting seems a bit weird, it might have been more effective if you blended the sunset in with the black you used as a background, because it kind of seems like you pasted it on. If u look at the bottom you can kind of see where it stops and if u change it i think it would look much more interesting. also the boy to the right side looks like he's just kind of floating there, if u added a bit more grass it would look more realistic to the person looking at it to tell them that this is what children are forced to do. I also think that you should change the font at the bottom because your using the same font in the entire piece and so i think it might be a little more interesting if you changed it up a bit. But overall, i thought it was a good composition and i really liked the way you tried to make the children fade away..
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