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Thursday, April 17, 2008
Tim G- Stop steroid use
5 comments:
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Tim your compostion is very well layed out. the bat as the handle was a good idea to still keep the baseball theme. the siringe was also greatly placed. the words are just a bit jumbled to read. i like it overall.
I like how the needles in his arm like a bat. It portrays right off the bat what about the baseball player you're going for. The coloring of the text is good because you pulled it out of his uniform. The catch phrase at the top is catchy and cute for anyone that likes baseball. All in all good job!
I thought that this poster was well done. The image is well thought out since it sticks to the message. I like how the needle and the bat are combined. The text is spaced a little weird but works. The message is easly found in both the text and picture.
timmyG, i think that your poster is really creative. when i look at it i get the meaning right away what your trying to persuade. the thing i like best about the poster is phrase and the font size you used is a good size. i also really like the bat, it is very CREATIVE!!!.
good project, I liked this one a lot. Not many kids chose this topic so way to be original. I like the layout but I'm not sure if the text sticks out enough. The text with the stroke works well at hte bottom. I think you should re-choose your words on the side they don't work for me. The qualty of your image looks high quality, good work on the needle. In my opinion this is one of the stronger pieces in the class.
5 comments:
Tim your compostion is very well layed out. the bat as the handle was a good idea to still keep the baseball theme. the siringe was also greatly placed. the words are just a bit jumbled to read. i like it overall.
I like how the needles in his arm like a bat. It portrays right off the bat what about the baseball player you're going for. The coloring of the text is good because you pulled it out of his uniform. The catch phrase at the top is catchy and cute for anyone that likes baseball. All in all good job!
I thought that this poster was well done. The image is well thought out since it sticks to the message. I like how the needle and the bat are combined. The text is spaced a little weird but works. The message is easly found in both the text and picture.
timmyG, i think that your poster is really creative. when i look at it i get the meaning right away what your trying to persuade. the thing i like best about the poster is phrase and the font size you used is a good size. i also really like the bat, it is very CREATIVE!!!.
good project, I liked this one a lot. Not many kids chose this topic so way to be original. I like the layout but I'm not sure if the text sticks out enough. The text with the stroke works well at hte bottom. I think you should re-choose your words on the side they don't work for me. The qualty of your image looks high quality, good work on the needle. In my opinion this is one of the stronger pieces in the class.
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