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ClusterMap
22 comments:
While your idea is good, your composition could be much better. It is cluttered and hard to read. Also your images are very rough and seem like they aren't supposed to be apart of the poster. The words you chose for test are good, but the coloring and font and also the positioning don't work. Its confusing. I also have no idea what the image in the bottom corner is. You should also watch watch out for pixels showing from it being too stretched out like in the cat.
Its a god idea, i think its the only endangered species poster. But i think maybe a stonger text to help capture attention would be alot more effective, give the text more room in you poster. I also think that maybe insead of using all the little pictres maybe a few bigger one would make it look neater and help it flow better. I think that mayb the cats head could be croped a little better.
This is an overall good idea, i think its the only endangered species poster. It could be improved though. The text is a little weak and should take up more space and be bolder so it will catch attetnion. Also i think the pictures are all spread out and it makes it a little choppy. If you used maybe two or three larger pictures it would help the poster flow alot better.
i dont understand half of what is going on. I understand the animals to thier given countries but what is the significance of everything at the bottom? Also, the brown text is very hard to read against the dark blue backround and the text needs to be closer together, I found myself searching for the message in the right order.
I agree with the other comments, while it is a good idea I think it could have been taken further so that the message could be conveyed easier. The text is hard to read, and I'm not quite sure what the image in the bottom right is.
the text is pretty hard to read the message s really good though i think if the font were a different color it would be easier to read. or maybe if the font was bolder. it looks almost a little cluttered maybe if you have less pictures or change the placement of them. i feel like the placement of the cat doesnt work with the layout.
Its a very interesting idea, but the image is just not that strong. The text is horrible, the meaning gets across by the use of words, but the format of the text is so messy it looks very poor aslo the color of the text is bad, maybe a white or black would work better. The images are very blurry and the colors are too bold, the idea was good but just to much of a mess to make the poster complete
I like the bright blue background, it makes it stand out from the other ones. But it is hard to know what the poster it supposed to be about at a quick glance. The text could have been darker and not so all over the place. I like how you used animal pictures to create the world. And the guns in the lower right hand corner, is that waht they are? it is hard to tell exactly what they are. The the shape of the cat's face is werid, you could have either found a different one of croped it better and you can also see the pixels showing. All the pictures could have also been better blended onto the background.
YOU HAVE A TERRIFIC TOPIC, what i believe you did wrong is your rendering needs improvement. the animals are cut off and are pretty blocky. alsow i believe it could be a bit more colorful...because i dont feel the colors in this
i think this idea is great, but the composition is bad. it is all blurred and you cant see anything really. the animals are just like plopped on. i dont like how they are just there. the colors are very sloppy and not a true color. it looks discolored or something. the text should have been bigger and bolder to capture someones attention
I believe that the cause that the poster is portraying is good the composition of the poster does not persuade me to do anything. The dark blue backgroung is very distrcting a long with the pictures that are very muted in color. This combinatons is a big turn off for the poster and makes the overall poster very lost and scattered with no set goal. I think that clearer pictures needed to be used in order to stand out against the dark blue background.
i think that the idea is there it just didnt come through. i feel this way because the text doesnot stand out, and the pictures dont pop. it could be much better with just a few little changes, but i understand the layout and idea of the earth and animals. thanks!
it is a great idea to talk about endangered species....but this poster just doesnt work. There is no main focus the colors of the words get lost with the world and people really have to look hard to notice what it is you are taalking about. I would change the contrast on the background and make the statements more organized. Giving the reader something to follow and be curious to get to the point.
I think this poster needs a lot more work to look more professional. The composistion doesn't work. It looks disorganized and messy. The wording works but it font is kind of hard to read. The colored background stands out more than the poster itself. So a more subtle background color would probably work better.
It was a good idea to have a poster on the issue, but it still needs a lot of work o be successful.
...Well, it could be a lot worse. This poster needs quite a bit of work to be strong and look persuasive. I like the map you did with the animals in it but it is too small and blury to make out. The random clippings of the animals do not work and really have no sense of persuasion. The color is too bright and you can not read the dull text behind it. I like the wording you did but not the color. It is compositionally wrong and overall looks like a child did it. But I have one question...What is the picture on the right with the brown \ through it?"
ummm.... very good ideas but your composition is not that great. i wish you would have done something more... more not choppy, less clutter and more artistic. i like the topic but i dont like the fact of all the animals. the countries look like you found it on google. it looks too good compared to the rest of the poster.
Im not sure how to see this poster. I really like the use of the animal faded into the country that they are from. Some of the things though really confuse me on the poster. I dont know what the figure is in the bottom right hand corner. I would say to take some time to revise everything besides the animals faded onto the continent they are from. You still portray your meaning though.
when looking at this poster i dont get it right away what the meaning is and it could be made across better. also the poster is really hard to read and the pictures all look like you just cut them out and threw them on there. the idea that your doing is good and i like that it is the only one in the whole two classes but there could be more done to make it better.
This poster is one of the weakest ones to me. I think it looks cluttered, and the pictures you used weren't the best. I think it would have been better if you used a different picture of the earth. I really like your topic but, and your idea but your poster needs alot of work.
well i think that your point is told but you really cant tell why and it didnt change my mind on the topic. maybe if the colors werent so mixed together it would be easier to read and more persuasive . its hard to read and could be differnt
I like your topic but there are a few things wrong first off maybe choosing a better font color because its hard to read, The blue background sort of makes me think what you want me to think about. But otherwise poor choice of pictures. I have no clue what the image is on the bottom right side. Maybe better pictures clear fonts and bold letters will work
good luck
The idea of this poster is good but it's not persuasive at all. I really like the idea of the map with the animals in it, but the pictures are not clear enough. I like that you used a bright blue background, but a different color font would have worked better. Also I can't tell what the picture in the bottom right hand corner is supposed to be.
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