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4 comments:
I think your poster clearly shows what your trying to persuade but with a little more color and more feelings it would be great.
The message your poster portrays is somewhat conflicting. Your main header and the question "why" are both in the same font and the same size. It makes me think you're trying to say, stop animal cruelty and asking why I should stop at the same time. Keep in mind that posters only provide one way communication. Your pictures reflect the cruelty that is done to these animals, but they conflict with your font and the ribbon near you header, which are somewhat happy. Your composition is good, but moving your ribbon up and moving the title over would make use of more negative space and help move your eyes around the page.
I believe the idea behind this poster is strong, but the way it was carried out doesn't match. There may have been a more complex way to put the pictures together, as opposed to a side by side comparison with nothing really meshing them together.
i like the pictures you used showing the animal cruelty but that was it. your overall composition could be improved a lot to get someones attention. first i think you should have done more with your pictures because it kind of looks like blocks just place to the side. and also i really don't think you need to put that "why?" there because i think the pics you used already explain "why". Plus the overall look of it seems a bit plain and you have a lot of negative space not making it stand out, if you used more color maybe red and black you could have created a mood of the deaths and bloodshed of abused animals and that might have told the reader a lot more of what's happening to animals. i think you poster just doesn;t seem finish and if you add to it and change some things up a bit im sure it would be much better.
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