Wednesday, April 16, 2008

Rachael P- Don't drink and drive

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

This is pretty good. i like the picture but the lines just look thrown in. i love the DON'T because its a good attention getter. It really does persuade me because of the text and the idea of the picture.

Anonymous said...

I think that the point that Rachel wanted to get across was achieved by the way the meaning of the text corresponds with the picture. I like the way the word "DON'T" is expressed to get the message out even more. Text placement is balanced. I like the fact that the top title is parallel with the bottom text. Beginning quote is bold which is a smart choice to get the message across and also balance the layout at the same time. I think if the picture placement was adjusted by stretching the left side of the center photo more towards the left it would make the whole poster more balanced because the left side in between the top and bottom text is bare and spacious. Overall its a decent design.

Anonymous said...

dear rachael
i think that this really showed the point of what you were trying to get across. i think the lines really helped the picture showing of that what could happen. i also think it really gets the message across to now drink and drive. if the picture was larger i think it would of conritbuted to helping the point. i really like how you set up the text and the dontbrings attention to it making you read it, and it really changed my mind.

Anonymous said...

i think that in your poster your really getting the point across especially with your DONT. it is big and bold. i also like at the bottom how you have a fact about drinking and driving , its good that it is small so its not taking up a lot of space but its still creative how you have it to show people. the picture could be a little larger to take up some more space but other than that. GREAT JOB.