Thursday, April 17, 2008

Jessica A- Fight American poverty

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

This composition is very strong. It has deep emotion and definatly gets the point across. It is a good idea just to keep it black and white and have no colors because it shows how strong this topic really is. I think you could have done something more creative with the text and possibly a lead-in to the page. The pictures you chose was a good decision because it shows the feelings behind it. but i think you could have used the negitive space better. It may be more pleasing to the eye if it wasn't focused in the center (i'm not sure). But overall it is a good, strong composition.

Anonymous said...

The composition is really good I love it. But I think that the Fight Poverty could have been a lot bolder and bigger so that it sticks out more. The pictures are great it really captures the emotion of what the people go through day to day. But the pictures could have been cropped a little better, the edges are a little choppy. But I really really like this poster over all though.

Anonymous said...

i really like the idea and composition of this poster. the pictures were all good choices they really show the feeling and importance of this issue. i think the text doesnt work really well with the issue and composition maybe a bolder font that will really grab your attention. maybe if both text werent in the center it might work better but overall i think it is very good

Anonymous said...

Jessica,
The use of the children in the poster appeals to a viewers emotions on the affects of poverty among young children. I though you had a great idea here... the only thing i would reccomend changing would maybe be the font but the font you used flows well with the poster too.

Anonymous said...

Jessica,
The use of the children in the poster appeals to a viewers emotions on the affects of poverty among young children. I though you had a great idea here... the only thing i would reccomend changing would maybe be the font but the font you used flows well with the poster too.