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Thursday, April 17, 2008
Danielle H- Stop the Darfur Genocide
4 comments:
Anonymous
said...
I like how this is such a creative poster, and how you actually used the country of Darfur and filled it in with different pictures of the genocide. I like the use of space and how informational the poster is.
This image is good, but with slight improvements it could be much better. I feel the pictures of the children displays sadness, but all of the color is a little too much, by shifting the colors to black and white, this could allow for the image to be more appealing to the eyes. Also I don't feel the text is very strong, its not bold enough to display the true feeling of the image. A simple change like this would make the image more appealing to the eyes, and draw the attention of more viewers.
Overall I really like this poster. The images work well in the collage to make up the shape of Darfur. The pictures are strong and emotional, helping out the poster as a whole. I agree with Ben that the text could have been changed, maybe to something more bold and outstanding.
The commenter above me is both immature and illiterate. Danielle, the use of the country for the outline of the pictures was a strong idea. it shows all of the problems INSIDE of the country and makes a strong point about doing something to stop it. I really liked your idea.
4 comments:
I like how this is such a creative poster, and how you actually used the country of Darfur and filled it in with different pictures of the genocide. I like the use of space and how informational the poster is.
This image is good, but with slight improvements it could be much better. I feel the pictures of the children displays sadness, but all of the color is a little too much, by shifting the colors to black and white, this could allow for the image to be more appealing to the eyes. Also I don't feel the text is very strong, its not bold enough to display the true feeling of the image. A simple change like this would make the image more appealing to the eyes, and draw the attention of more viewers.
Overall I really like this poster. The images work well in the collage to make up the shape of Darfur. The pictures are strong and emotional, helping out the poster as a whole. I agree with Ben that the text could have been changed, maybe to something more bold and outstanding.
The commenter above me is both immature and illiterate. Danielle, the use of the country for the outline of the pictures was a strong idea. it shows all of the problems INSIDE of the country and makes a strong point about doing something to stop it. I really liked your idea.
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