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6 comments:
I like the layout.the poster grabs your attention effectively.Great use of bold font...just out of curiosity, what do you mean by "For Us" ?
I think that you should have considered using a green color from the Iran flag, instead of that grayish color in the mushroom shaped object. On a positive stand point i like the use of the black background and the way that you used the red paint to fill in the Iran Leader. The way you made the title diagonal makes it more interesting...Overall i thought this was a pretty good poster, im not so sure how its persuading though?
Dear Zachary, this poster could use some definite improvments. For example a wider range of color could bu used. Like Brendan said adding more green could have added some internal structure and fleshed it out some more.
Dear Zachary, again. you do actually have some positives to this poster also. For example the message is presented very quickly which is the point of these posters after all. Also the image of Irans leader turned red is also a very strong message.
Overall this poster could have been better but still gets the point across it simply needs more internal structure.
let me ask a question. Which of these two is more important: "For Us" or "War with Iran Ends Quickly"? Or are they of equal importance. Either way, the balance between these to texts is way off. Try to keep the more important one "in front" of the lesser. This doesn't necessarily mean on top of, but it should show itself more. Whether it is color, value, font, bold, italic, or whatever, there is always a hierarchy of what is most important in every single design. The use of red can be very empowering, but it seems that you have abused this power in this layout. Also the graphics you chose are very weak and in no order what so ever.
Jesus Walks
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