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4 comments:
Well, the picture over all dosen't look finished. The words "Global Warming" at the top look some what childish. The pictures though are convincing that we are indeed responsible for global warming and that it is our fault for the most part. The text was poorly done but the words them selves were well thought of and makes you think. The pictures go nicely with the words and make you feel like global warming could have been prevented.
i think this poster is showing gobal warming i think the topic is pretty striaght forward and there. but the problem is that is doesnt look totally finished and it is too balanced with the words and just everything. i think the wya ryan would expressed it , it would have been better if better used text and maybe different arrangement of the pictures.
this poster was very weak over all. the spatial organization is sloppy because it is back and forth with its pictures i the same pattern. There is no dominance in this either which doesn't draw my attention in any way. The proportions are on only because all the photos are the same size. It is balanced well but in a way that makes it graphically very uninteresting.
The text is very weak. There is too much so i get bored immmediatly and have to think and go back over what the text is saying because it is placed wrongly which makes it not as easy to read. the font doesn't work and either does the color of the "global warming" in the top left. overall this reminded me of one of our layout studies which completely did not interest me. It looks like it lacks effort at all.
Jei M.
This is too symmetrical, your text is not placed well, the colors and fonts clash, and your pictures have fotosearch on them. This design is very poor, and I can safely assume that you do not take this class seriously. If that's not the case then here are some suggestions. Instead of working around multiple images, work around one. By doing this you are more apt to stumble onto some internal structure and implied hierarchies in your design. Also, vary the space inbetween lines in a phrase. The photoshop default is for the most part never right for the design. It may take more time then you want to spend on it, but I urge you to not just blow it off. What's the point in doing it if you're not trying your hardest?
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