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7 comments:
I think that the overall product is very good. The proportions are done well, the text on the top and bottom balance eachother out. Except the "the big bang?" next to the picture of the earth seems squished in there, it needs to go under the top text or something. I like how the dominance of the poster is the earth with the hands on it, that is what my eyes looked at first. The hands on the earth demonstrate God's hands creating earth. The composition is good, however the layout of the text is off. I feel like some of the text could have some arch to it or something interesting like that. I really like the picture, I like the glowing of the hands and the earth, looks like the earth is being created. I like the text at the bottom because of the outlining. But, I think that the text at the top is too boring, there needs to be something that catches the eye about it because its the start of the poster. Overall, i like the poster and I do think that it persuades that God was the creator of earth, not the big bang.
I feel like this persausive poster was good. I like how the hands our on the earth, and how they are glowing. It is almost like God or someone is touching earth.
I think the text went real well with this because the "WHO" really grabs my attention and makes me wonder who and what actually made earth. Making the glowoing hands touch the earth makes me more confident that the Big Bang was what started it.
The pictures went real well with the world and the glowing hands on it. You really could not ask for a better combination to make.
Overall, I feel like this is a great poster.
I think this is one of the stronger posters of the class. The question and answer shown definitely raise a good point, and it is successful in converting the viewer's opinion.
I also like that the hands (representing God) are held over a glowing earth - it helps to add to the God allusion. I think it may have been a little better if you used a picture of earth instead of a globe, since it would be more realistic.
As for the text- I like that WHO is larger, it reflects some intonation of how someone would read it to help get your point across. 'the big bang' doesn't seem to fit really well, but it doesn't take away from the meaning, and i like how the blue matches the blue from the globe. The white outline on the last line of text helps it to stand out and make it more important than the other text. I don't understand why 'onlyONE' is typed the way it is, though... only one is not one word, and I dont think that capitalizing all of ONE helps much to persuade. If you had it as 'only One' i feel it would fit better, since it is two separate words, and the O of One is capitalized to show that you're talking about God.
Overall, your point is communicated efficiently, and i think it reaches its goal of persuading the viewer to think differently. Nice work :)
Your use of a gradient as a background is very nice. A lot of people do no know how to pull this off but you did. My biggest problem with this is the type. I don't think the positions or sizes are very strong, so i would suggest fiddling around with those. You definitely want to move the big bang, and make it smaller. Mess with the levels of the hands too. They don't have the same illustrated feeling as the globe, which end up clashing, which is not good.
This poster is very well made and the colors are well put together. The glow is what attracts my eye to the world.
The poster is very well proportioned which makes the poster look nice and eases the eyes. The dominance of the poster is the world and the hands. To me it is showing god holding the world. The balance is very strong. I like how there is text on the top and the bottom along with the picture and the text of the big bang are diagonal which looks good. The composition is dominant by the way of the glow and the gradation put together along with the black text and the blue text. The picture and the words all go good together. Everything in this poster is spread out enough. There is not to much open space and it is not cluttered.
The text is very strong on the top half of the page. I did not really understand why onlyONE are one word? In my opinion it would look better if there was a space between them.
The picture use was very creative to be having "God" holding the world as if he created it. The glow around the world along with the gradation.
I think that they achieved there persuasive argument. It could of had been a little more straight forward that it was for creationism, but i think the point was still brought across. the poster was very strong.
The part that draws me in the most is the hands on the world. I like how she made them doninant within her poster. Although i like thisposter overall but the main problem i see in it, is the text. It's not a strong font and doesn't help with the point your trying to make. Changing this would greatly impact the meaning of the poster more. i think the poster is well balanced, and has negative space in all the right places. Overall i think she did very well at capturing her views on creationism.
I though overall this was one of the worst posters I have ever seen. There is no creativity and it doesnt pursuade me to want to do anything.
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