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Friday, November 9, 2007
Sara B - Abortion is not only solution
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i thought that this poster was very inviting. The way you use thumb tacks is creative and a nice touch. The text choice was an average choice. I think more of a bolder text would have worked better.
The choice of color that was used was good but i think even more color would have helped thos poster become stronger.Try using more color. I really like how the layout of these photos are balanced it really works well with the poster.
The background was a nice touch it brings out the pictures more and i think your slogan works well. I really like how you made the bottom "Abortion is not the only solution" stands out well. Graphically this is an average poster. Your poster is very pesuasive.
I felt like the work done on this poster was strong and unuqie. I like how the thumbtacks are used. They draw me into the poster, and attract my attention. I also like how you put past present famous leaders to present leaders. I think that the text went well with the it, and I like how "the next" is getting kinda like squeezed in. Overall, I feel like this is a strong poster, and that you are right, anyone can be next.
i really like this poster, it persuades me to think twice about abortion. i like the text and size, i like pictures featured and the way they are arranged as well. your choice of words and examples are great. however it seems to friendly and cutsie. the pink in the back and thumbtacks makes it seem like a middle school poster board friends post pictures on, not an important issue you are trying to broadcast.
i feel that the poster is strong in many areas. i like how the background color is also the highlight color for "abortion is not the only solution." it kind of makes it stand out. i think the thumbtacks are a creative idea and making them different colors helps make it stand out more. The pictures are good, and i like how they are kind of placed at random, not in like a row or something. The top text is kind of plain in color but since it is distorted and stuff i think it works well. overall i think using present and people from the past helps this poster work well.
This persuasive poster is very creative. Making the background like a cork board with the pins was a good idea and you worked it well. You chose 4 good photos for your poster. they are all very important people, either today or in our past. with out them the world would be different and that point itself got your point across.
The bottom text could have been better. When you say, "abortion is not the answer" that is your point and that is what your trying to get across to your audience. It should stick out more than the other words in your poster.
i like how the text on the top forms around the photos. it works well. your placement of the photos are balanced as well. having the two colored photos next to eachoter and the two grayscale photos next to eachoter works well with your poster.
I think that this slogan was one of the strongest in the class. This poster was well done. The pictures are balanced and it is a very interesting poster to look at... I think that the slogan really makes you think a little more about the issue. The idea of the thumb tacks was very bright. The text at the top is pretty strong i think but i think the text at the bottom needs to be bolder.
This poster was pretty strong with little to work on.
I think that this slogan was one of the strongest in the class. This poster was well done. The pictures are balanced and it is a very interesting poster to look at... I think that the slogan really makes you think a little more about the issue. The idea of the thumb tacks was very bright. The text at the top is pretty strong i think but i think the text at the bottom needs to be bolder.
This poster was pretty strong with little to work on.
From a design point of view (layout of elements), this is stronger than some of the others; but from a subject point of view, it is not working for me. The photos of all of these people are not directly related to your issue, which requires the observer to think about why they are there, which is not the best idea. Designs should be to the point, but also visually pleasing. You satisfied one of these, but without the other, that is pretty much pointless. The pushpins are very distracting and could probably be taken out of the design. The drop shadow on the text at the bottom is nice; it makes the text pop a little more. I would have made the text a little larger at the bottom since that is part of the message.
This poster is one of the strongest i have seen. It gets the point across and gets my attention with all of the famous people. The picture is very balanced with the text on the top and bottom and the pictures in the middle. The dominance of the poster would be the pictures and how they look like they are put on a push pin board. Even though the spacing of the pictures vere kind of cluttered it looks good.
I like how the pictures looks like they are on a push pin board and how they are of famous people. The only thing that i would change about the pictures is to make it look more like a poloriod picture by having more white space on the bottom like the Einstein picture. This idea to arrange the pictures was an excelent and creative idea.
The text looks really good how its bold and big which leads you to the pcitures then leads you to the text at the bottom which is the main point of the whole poster. I like how the text is high lighted in red, it makes it look very important and catches your eye.
This poster did achieve to communicate to their persuasive argument. It is a very strong poster thats gets the idea across fast without a lot of words. This is one of the best posters.
9 comments:
i thought that this poster was very inviting. The way you use thumb tacks is creative and a nice touch. The text choice was an average choice. I think more of a bolder text would have worked better.
The choice of color that was used was good but i think even more color would have helped thos poster become stronger.Try using more color. I really like how the layout of these photos are balanced it really works well with the poster.
The background was a nice touch it brings out the pictures more and i think your slogan works well. I really like how you made the bottom "Abortion is not the only solution" stands out well. Graphically this is an average poster. Your poster is very pesuasive.
I felt like the work done on this poster was strong and unuqie. I like how the thumbtacks are used. They draw me into the poster, and attract my attention. I also like how you put past present famous leaders to present leaders. I think that the text went well with the it, and I like how "the next" is getting kinda like squeezed in. Overall, I feel like this is a strong poster, and that you are right, anyone can be next.
i really like this poster, it persuades me to think twice about abortion. i like the text and size, i like pictures featured and the way they are arranged as well. your choice of words and examples are great. however it seems to friendly and cutsie. the pink in the back and thumbtacks makes it seem like a middle school poster board friends post pictures on, not an important issue you are trying to broadcast.
i feel that the poster is strong in many areas. i like how the background color is also the highlight color for "abortion is not the only solution." it kind of makes it stand out. i think the thumbtacks are a creative idea and making them different colors helps make it stand out more. The pictures are good, and i like how they are kind of placed at random, not in like a row or something. The top text is kind of plain in color but since it is distorted and stuff i think it works well. overall i think using present and people from the past helps this poster work well.
This persuasive poster is very creative. Making the background like a cork board with the pins was a good idea and you worked it well. You chose 4 good photos for your poster. they are all very important people, either today or in our past. with out them the world would be different and that point itself got your point across.
The bottom text could have been better. When you say, "abortion is not the answer" that is your point and that is what your trying to get across to your audience. It should stick out more than the other words in your poster.
i like how the text on the top forms around the photos. it works well. your placement of the photos are balanced as well. having the two colored photos next to eachoter and the two grayscale photos next to eachoter works well with your poster.
I think that this slogan was one of the strongest in the class. This poster was well done. The pictures are balanced and it is a very interesting poster to look at... I think that the slogan really makes you think a little more about the issue. The idea of the thumb tacks was very bright.
The text at the top is pretty strong i think but i think the text at the bottom needs to be bolder.
This poster was pretty strong with little to work on.
I think that this slogan was one of the strongest in the class. This poster was well done. The pictures are balanced and it is a very interesting poster to look at... I think that the slogan really makes you think a little more about the issue. The idea of the thumb tacks was very bright.
The text at the top is pretty strong i think but i think the text at the bottom needs to be bolder.
This poster was pretty strong with little to work on.
Sorry about the double comment haha...wowwww
From a design point of view (layout of elements), this is stronger than some of the others; but from a subject point of view, it is not working for me. The photos of all of these people are not directly related to your issue, which requires the observer to think about why they are there, which is not the best idea. Designs should be to the point, but also visually pleasing. You satisfied one of these, but without the other, that is pretty much pointless. The pushpins are very distracting and could probably be taken out of the design. The drop shadow on the text at the bottom is nice; it makes the text pop a little more. I would have made the text a little larger at the bottom since that is part of the message.
This poster is one of the strongest i have seen. It gets the point across and gets my attention with all of the famous people. The picture is very balanced with the text on the top and bottom and the pictures in the middle. The dominance of the poster would be the pictures and how they look like they are put on a push pin board. Even though the spacing of the pictures vere kind of cluttered it looks good.
I like how the pictures looks like they are on a push pin board and how they are of famous people. The only thing that i would change about the pictures is to make it look more like a poloriod picture by having more white space on the bottom like the Einstein picture. This idea to arrange the pictures was an excelent and creative idea.
The text looks really good how its bold and big which leads you to the pcitures then leads you to the text at the bottom which is the main point of the whole poster. I like how the text is high lighted in red, it makes it look very important and catches your eye.
This poster did achieve to communicate to their persuasive argument. It is a very strong poster thats gets the idea across fast without a lot of words. This is one of the best posters.
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