Monday, May 11, 2009

Be Yourself

6 comments:

-Isaac Ruiz- said...
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Fredrick Hirschman said...

all in all, i dont think this poster really gets the point across visually. the message is clearly shown using text, but you cant rely on just text when designing something like this. the effects themselfs make the poster seem like a dream which is sort of cool. position overall of all the things on the poster is good, however there isnt many things in it. good idea, but its lacking visual appeal and direction.

MJulian said...

I like the way the photograph you used really portrays the idea of him thinking about what other people think but hes not with them hes by himself being himself thats a good idea. The font you used works well its not to fancy its just right for this good job.

Mindy said...

i like this poster a lot!! i think the image you used really brings the point across and the you blurred it really draws attention to the boy and the table he is looking at. the poster is very balanced visually and have good composition over all. i think this is a great design and dont think it has any major problems

Unknown said...

This was one of my favorite posters. Having the person close up and the people sitting at the table farther away created good proportion in the image. This also created a pathway for the eye and made my eyes move through the whole poster. The placement and use of space also contributed to this. Also, I felt the pictures were edited in a very interesting way and fit with the message. The issue is unique and portrayed in a way many people can relate to. The only thing I would do to improve this would be to fix the leading and kerning in the text--it's a little crammed. Overall I thought this was a strong composition!

-Isaac Ruiz- said...

I think that this work is very complete and conveys the message that the artist is trying to say. I love how he used great balance between himself and the people in the cafe in the distance, leveling out the big and small objects. He also used effect to bring the artists vision to the people sitting at the table, which made
it seem like the arist was in Brad's view. The effects were used well also. The only thing I didn't
quite comprehend was how the picture related to it's subject. -Isaac Ruiz-