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4 comments:
The composition of this poster is somewhat weak. There is a large amount of negative space on the left side. My eye goes right to the headline because of it's size and font, which is good, but after that, it goes nowhere. There is so much text that your point does not come across well. The background is very hard to see as well. I think it is a car wreck of some kind, but if you made it easier to see, it would really tie the poster together very well.
I am drawn to this poster for some reason, but it still has several weak elements. Your message is portrayed very well, but some things could be improved to get it across better. I think the font "Killed by a drunk driver" could be a little bit larger, bringing the focus to the topic. The picture of the girl is a great element to have in the poster, but still looks like it was cut out of a magazine. If you bring up the opacity on the background it would be easier to understand what's happening behind her. I really like the composition, and I think it works well for your message. Like I said, there are several weak aspects of this poster, but I am still drawn to it more than I am drawn to the others. I like the idea of crossing out the things she could have done had she not been killed. You make a strong point here that I would say is hard to argue.
i like the idea of this poster, and how you had a creative way of portraying the idea that drunk driving ended the little girl's life and she has lost the opportunity to live the rest of her life. I think that you should have made the girl's opacity lower, and the picture of the car accident higher opacity maybe to give the idea that the girl "is fading away." i also agree with katy, that the text should be in a more bold font, the font you chose portrays a happy fun feeling to me, which is not what you want for a poster about drunk driving. overall, good job though.
There is a lot of empty space on the left and the picture of the girl could have been blended in a little bit more. I really like the idea that you have with what the words are saying at the top, however the killed by a drunk driver could have been a little bit larger. I think the message you are trying to say is very clear and I like how the background is a car crash. I am drawn to the girl first, she kind of sticks out and the words are lost, you could have made the backgorund of the words a little darker to make it stand out more.
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