Monday, April 21, 2008

Korry K- Stop the greenhouse effect

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

I really like it! I think it is a strong composition and a clever idea. I really like how the nuclear sign is in the Earth amongst the green smoke. I think it could have been blured in or something to make it look less copy and pasted. I like the text and I don't know why, but i think the "effect" should be the same text and color as "greenhouse". The smoke could have been adjusted differently to make it look more like it is coming out of the power plant. This poster really gets the point across and i think it is overall a strong composition.

Anonymous said...

Well, it's a really unique composition and I like the idea you were goin for. There are a couple problems though. The first of which is that nuclear powerplants do not contribute to the greenhouse effect. Nuclear power is green albeit for the radioactive waste.

Secondly, I felt that the smokestack was a little too bright and the levels should have been adjusted, or the image burned, in order to portray a more negative feel.

Anonymous said...

A Clever idea. I enjoyed the Hazard Symbol in the planet, but it needs to be blurred in a little more to look less... well fake. The Smokestack is a little overpowering, and it needs to be toned down a bit, bt other than that you have a fine poster here.

Anonymous said...

kory, I really enjoyed your poster, I think its a very creative idea and I liked how the earth and the hazard symbol is morphed into one. I think that the font on the side could have been changed to relate to the topic a little more. The smoke stack doesn't look like it belongs I think you probably should have made it a little darker so it didn't stick out as much. Overall nice job.

Secondly, the comments above mine are ridiculous, if your going to write something of that nature don't hide behind "anonymous" or don't write it at all.