Monday, April 21, 2008

Collen D- Stop Smoking

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

i think that the little girls make you think about second hand smoke and how you could be hurting cute little kids like that. i like the hand too, i think it's creative. i think he colors are appropriate too, but i think you could have left the kids black and white to match the rest of it, and you could have kept stop in red so it grabs your attention like it already does.

Anonymous said...

I agree with Hanna for the most part. This is a strong poster that reminds you of the danger of second hand smoke. But I think it was a good idea to keep the girls in a faded color, it shows the "dimming" of their life. I think the hand could have been blurred in on the sides to make it look less cut out amd more a part of the poster. The background color was a good choice because it reminded you of smoke. I really like the text you used (except the top wavy text) and the colors you used for them. Overall a strong poster and composition.

Anonymous said...

this poster get the point across that you should stop smoking for the sake of other peoples lives. The little girls actually help in persuading people to think before they smoke. The thing you could do to improve the poster is to maybe add something that will make a smoker more intersted because thats who the poster is towards.